Four years ago, I went with my best friend to Argentina. We were planning this for a long time, after one year (more and less), we had enought money for the trip.
Our planes were to go to Buenos Aires for one month, in bus, hitchhiking, with tent, a trip very normal for two young guys. But during the travel we had complications and dissagrements. First, we lost our tent. How? In a small city when we were hitchhiking with a very nice person, we forgotthe tent in the car. Second, when we came to Córdova my firend was so tired that he wanted to take a hostel. One day passed, two days, and the next days.
I started to think and realize that he only wants to stay in Córdova and live two weeks like a King, totally different to the plan that we had before, and I wanted to keep traveling whitout much money to Buenos Aires. However, we stayed in Córdova because all things were so cheap that we felt like rich people. We drunk the most expensive whiskey and ate the most expensive food, we went to very big electronic partys, very exclusive clubs, and it was very fun, and different from all my past vacations. I really enjoyed it, but differently. We were in all touristics places, we knew beautiful women but always accommodated. And come back to Santiago after two and half a weeks really like a King, and what can i say? It was interesting, but isn’t something for me. I prefer travelling in a mistical way, but the experience was fun and “what I ate and drank, don’t remove me nobody”.
I like your story. It's so funny! I understood everything but you should check the time of some verbs. You wrote some actions in present and you are talking about the past :)
ResponderEliminarWell, even if you didn't have the holiday you expected, at least you have a new experience to talk about :)
ResponderEliminarBut about the writing, you may check some words, because I understood the meaning, but they were a little out of place :/
See you later
Gonzalo,
ResponderEliminarWC: 307. Very Good. Yours is an example of things that go totally different from plans. You adapted to the new situation easily, though.
Remember you should always write the personal pronoun "I" like this, with capital "I"
You need to edit your text in a better way, check spelling mistakes like:
touristics enough(t) dissagrements. firend whitout partys mistical
Nice try: “what I ate and drank, don’t remove me nobody”. Not comprehensible in English.
Cheers,
JC